Please review my business site

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  1. simplyjo

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    Thanks I choose Verdana now - Better ?

     
  2. Fergal

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    It looks great Jo, well done, your site is improving and looking more professional all the time.
     
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    Seems to be improving and looking much better.
    But some of your sentences/paragraphs are indented, especially the first sentence and last paragraph. You may want fix that. After that, it will be ok. :D
     
  4. realitybites.in

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    simplyjo
    i just fixed visual editor problem
    now u can formatting of this text, even paste from word.


    simplyjo there is little in this ...because the theme ur are using is Frameworks Theme

    just like Thematic and Thesis wordpress theme

    and i really dont know how that theme work .....at present ...as i am learning it now

    it may take some time to understand it ..till then i cant really help there ....after i understand then i will u in this issue

    but my advise is that ....u can try other WordPress them free or paid
     
  5. simplyjo

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    Thanks all for your help :) Please do keep your suggestions coming and I will try and implement them all.
     
  6. Kay

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    Take or leave these as you wish Jo. :)

    1. Your sidebar testimonials are all about yourself, yet the main page content refers to "We" all the time. Add more testimonials about the work of other team members too and mention them by name for more balance, or you'll have everyone requesting only Jo does the work.

    Alternatively add a part to the About Us tab saying you run the team so visitors can tie together who the mysterious "we" are and who you are in the scope of things.

    2. You also have a number of punctuation errors on your main page. You need to revise that right away because some will run a mile if they see that, Jo.

    3. Turnaround as in turnaround time is one word.

    4. I would suggest you rename the Rate Card tab to Pricing. Many people skim sites and they may not grasp that's what Rate Card refers to. Keep it simple.

    5. If it's possible to tweak your Contact form plugin, I'd add in a dropdown where they can select what the enquiry is about. Say even just adding in "small order enquiry", bulk order enquiry", "general enquiry" and/or "feedback and suggestions".

    That would help you when it gets busier to prioritize the emails as they come in. You may for example want to deal with a bulk order enquiry that could mean a lot of business ASAP and before a general enquiry that could be answered at a later time.

    That's just some quick suggestions. Sorry that I don't have a lot of time to go over it more thoroughly.

    I use Wordpress too btw although I don't claim to be an expert. Feel free to shoot me a question anytime by PM if you're stuck and can't find anyone to help you. I'll do my best. If you PM me I won't miss it because I get email notifications from here. I barely sleep so am worth a try even if it's 1 or 2am my time. I'm usually up too by 5.30 am. :)

    All the best, Jo! Good luck with it all and many congrats on raising your profile! It's looking good overall.
     
    #26 Kay, Apr 13, 2010
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    It looks really user friendly now. You did a great job! It shows only your hard work. Keep it up!
     
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    Look good, but not looking as professional view, you have to work very hard and review suggestion which people had already posted

    thanks
     
  9. simplyjo

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    Hi Kay,

    All solid suggestions. Many thanks for your time and effort. I am off to make some changes in the 'About Us' page and will surely check out the punctuation errors as well. Thanks a ton !

    Jo

     
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    Website is good but i feel that you seem to have installed a basic and 'easy' template may be you did not want too much of design and graphics.though it looks nice and decent.
     
  11. Kay

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    If a site is about offering content, is it not better for the focus to be upon content, ie words, rather than graphics? If I were a potential client and there were more graphics than text, I'd find that odd. Nothing wrong with a clean look. :)
     
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    Thanks Kay.. those were my views as well. !

     
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    Later review of your website

    Had a look on 6 May 2010 - after you had acted on earlier suggestions - and think it tells viewers what they need to know.

    The home page is easy to read, and the links all work.

    My only suggestion is to add an example, rather than just give the links.

    Pat
     
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    Oh really nice layout of website. You done very good job carry-on.
     
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    One of your navbar links is covering your main header, you might want to move that. Also try reducing the space between the links it will make the navbar flow much better together.
     
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    You website look good but need some improvement in website content.
     
  17. Matt-APEXCGI

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    Now looks perfect!
     
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    Now your website look better.
     
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    Your website look great you done very good carry-on.
     
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    Sorry to say but website is taking too much time to load, you better work on loading speed to earn search engine benefits for your services.
     

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