Will you please give me your feelings on my sales text?

Discussion in 'Growing and Managing a Business' started by bill rogers, Feb 25, 2011.

  1. bill rogers

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    Hi All,

    My website is not nearly as visually cool as many of your websites, but my main question is how you feel about my sales text. Can you take a moment please and give me your thoughts on my sales text at start a janitorial office cleaning business?

    Thanks and best to you!
     
  2. Casey

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    Consider using bigger headlines, placed in the middle, like attracting atention. Also, use a white body background, as some PC users having themes may see other colors if you dont specify it. Overall it looks great.
     

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