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  1. Ridwan_Sugi

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    Hi everyone,
    i just finished update my site.., please give me some input about my site...,
    if you were me, what would you add to this site,
    do not hesitate, I am ready to accept any criticism

    Best regards,
    Ridwan S - Red Shield
     
  2. patrick0001

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    I just visited your site, it seem like the profolio gallery not working. Beside that, you can further improve the meta tag, so that in can improve SEO SERP.
     
  3. Jerlene

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    I like the header but the font used with the logo isn't exactly right. Maybe try a different font or add a shadow or gradient, just something to make it "pop".
     
  4. Shahrier

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    The logo is good, but I am not a fan of the theme. I think you need a better theme.

    Other than that, good job.
     
  5. Ridwan_Sugi

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    Hi Patrick...,
    Thank you for mention about my Portfolio page.., I already checked and it seem no problem..? But I will made further check out from the page...,
    and about meta tag.., thank you for your suggestion..., I will research about it again...

    Best regards,
    Ridwan - Red Shield

    Hi Sharier.., thank you for the input...
    i will try to make it with a better theme soon..

    Best regards,
    Ridwan - Red Shield

    Thank you for the Input Jerlene..
    I will change the header based on your suggestion...

    Thank you again for your time..
    Best regards,
    Ridwan - Red Shield
     
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  6. Shahrier

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    Also, Ridwan, try not to post more than 1 time in a row. Just include what you want to say in one post.
     
  7. Jerlene

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    No problem. Make sure to let us know when you change the header so we can take a look at it and give you our input.:)
     
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    It lack presentation value. Too wordy and not eye appealing.

    Sorry to be so honest

    Chris
     
  9. broink

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    Love the logo, very good portfolio.
    I dont like the main page, I think you can do it better.:)
     
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    your main page should look like the sites you do..EYEPOPPING.
     
  11. Sophina

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    I don't like the dark colors and the black and red combo...
     
  12. Joseph.Shivell

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    I took a lok at your site today, and you still have problems with your meta tags. Two of your pages have the same Title Tag, and the other three have nothing but your website name - no keywords at all. Also, your "keywords" meta tags are the same for every page, and you are using one "description" meta tag for two pages, and another one for three pages.
    Also, your "About Us" page has your contact info instead of information about the company, and you have no "Contact Us" page.
     
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    I took a look at your site today, and you still have problems with your meta tags. Two of your pages have the same Title Tag, and the other three have nothing but your website name - no keywords at all. Also, your "keywords" meta tags are the same for every page, and you are using one "description" meta tag for two pages, and another one for three pages.
    Also, your "About Us" page has your contact info instead of information about the company, and you have no "Contact Us" page.
     
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    I just visited your site and all I see is a lot of font. Your main page should be "eye candy" maybe you can add more presentation. I like the logo though. :)
     
  15. bestbuys4busines

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    Hi Ridwan, nice looking site, here are my suggestions around wording (underline indicates change)...

    At Red Shield Minisite, we specialise in designing minisites and eCovers to (delete that will) suit the needs of your business. We are very creative and (delete are always) love coming up with new and fresh website concepts. As a professional minisite design company, we focus on your preferred look and feel including optimisation for search engine placement. Our minisite niche packages include quality content, clean & creative designs, and unique graphics so your site doesn't look the same as another.

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    High Quality Graphics
    We use the highest quality unique graphics (delete with details) that are optimised for fast loading and SEO.
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    Save Your Time
    We do all the work for you so you don't have to figure it all out yourself. No complicated software for you to learn! No need to purchase expensive graphic programs! No need to stress over how to do something technical!
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    Fast Response
    You will receive a high quality niche design with content within 2-3 business days, sometimes less!
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    Low Price
    We save you money by providing top quality at affordable prices with a professional Minisite and/or eCover design for less than $100!
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    [TD]Money Back Guarantee
    We want to make sure you are happy with the end result, therefore, we will strive to ensure your satisfaction or your money back, but we know that won't be necessary.


    Grab your share ! what am I grabbing, templates or graphics social media icons? Put a little explanation there.
    Simply enter your name and email address to get 100 Most Popular Social Media Icons - FREE!


    use 'here is what our customers are saying..., rather than client testimonial

    Put a link in the still thinking text where you mention signup to receive the template, so visitors can link to your signup page if they are not sure about placing an order.

    Use the information in your PS in your why choose us section above. We have worked with the best companies (include a link to profile if you have examples) and we have created top-notch designs for many successful entrepreneurs (include a link to profile if you have examples).

    Hope this helps you.

    Cheers
    Michelle

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    PS. To make your site more graphically impressive I would use your profile images in a flash show on your front page under the 'At Red Shield' para in the same size you have your thumbnails on that page. Also, make your social media more prominent and create an affiliate program. Cheers
     
  17. smith.liam

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    Just had a look at your site.

    The layout and design seem quite good - it is really clear what you do, which is obviously important.

    One comment regarding the payment/ pricing options - I wonder if you have too many or if the layout could be improved? It seems a little confusing, which could put off potential buyers. Perhaps three clear options would be better? For example a cheap/ low quality, medium price/ quality and high end option, with the middle option being the one you wish to sell the most of (relating to the psychology of buying/ habits), perhaps what is now the "Best Selling" 'Gold' option.

    Just my two cents

    Liam
     
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    A lot better but I still think if you are promoting a web desing company you need bette graphics....like your portfolio and the Back-Linx website. That looks so flashy and cool but your site just seems like a simple wordpress template.

    Sometimes simple sells better but your site is also your resume so it may need to be jazzed up a bit.

    Here is your competitors site...who would you choose to go with?
    http://www.extremewebgraphix.com/
     
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    Worry about your site first, then you can do all the onpage factors next
     
  20. ThirdSEO

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    I can't find the link to your site. Am I missing something??
     
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