Please check my FAQ page

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  1. Scarface_007

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    http://www.kidzklips.com/faqs/

    Please check the above page and let me know if the questions are ok so far and i would appreciate any questions that you can share as well,,,

    Thanks in advance,
     
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    A few mistakes and grammatical errors but seems like a decent FAQ page to me with a good range of questions.
     
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    My grammar is not that good do you mind point out mistakes jay? so that I could sort them out,
     
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    I would change the order of the questions to reflect what the visitor is looking for. Someone thinking of joining the site might want to know whether the site is safe for children, and any restrictions on the site, before becoming a member, where someone who is already a member would want to know how to post articles or videos. I would therefore put the questions in the following order:

    Is Kidzklips safe for children?
    What are the restrictions on Kidzklips?
    How do I register as a member?
    How do I post articles?
    How do I upload videos?
    Where do I paste the code from You-Tube?

    You will notice I changed the wording a bit, using "I" instead of "We", and reduced the use of capital letters. You will also notice I changed "the website" to "Kidzklips". I would do this throughout the FAQs when referring to the website (As an alternative, you can use "Kidzklips.com", but make sure it is consistent throughout). I would also describe how to do things rather than simply entering a URL or referencing a link as the FAQ answer, because going to the URL or following the link would require registration as a member. The exception, of course, would be , "How do I register as a member?", although you can add "Go to our registration page at " before the URL. Or, you can say, "Go to our registration page by clicking here", and the word "here" would be a link to the registration page. Also, in the answer to "Can I upload videos from my desktop?", I would capitalize "You-Tube". In the answer to "What are the restrictions on Kidzklips?" I would change it to read as follows:

    Because Kidzklips is intended for children, the following are strictly forbidden:
    1. No child abuse/pornography videos
    2. No foul language in comments

    Kidzklips also does not allow videos for which you do not own the copyright.
     
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    wow Thanks Joeroxx this is superb, I will implement everything you added thank you so much for this, You made my day thanks a lot.
     
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    Joeroxx: just done the way you mentioned its looking much better already, thanks once again.
     
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    ScarFace: I like the FAQ page. I hope you keep some more FAQs. Also, Are there any restrictions on this site with the Age limitation?
     

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