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  1. mrchamp

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    Website : Online Shopping in Pakistan

    Title : Websites & Online Businesses Directory of Pakistan

    Description : To provide an area for all the online business starters to promote there websites to the targeted audience.

    Mission : To help others in starting up their online business.

    I want you all to provide me your suggestions & feedback.

    Regards
     
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    The site looks very sharp and professional, well done with that mrchamp. Personally I prefer to submit sites to directories that don't require registration prior to submission. However, you may have good reason to require that registration. If submitted this forum to your directory and hopefully it will be approved.

    Doing a little work on the title tags of your various directory categories would help your SEO. For example when looking at your forums category it's quite clear that you want to optimise it for terms such as "pakistani forums", perhaps it would be possible to add that term to the title tag of that category page.

    Again, overall the directory looks great and I wish you every success with it.
     
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    Thanks alot fergal for your suggestion & feedback, I have just completed the development work & now working on SEO & link building. Your forum is of gr8 help.

    Well you can see your listing here :)

    http://onlineshops.pk/ads/business-advice-forum
     
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    It's a very cool site. I like the color scheme you used. It's very cool in the eyes.
    Everything seems to be really perfect!

    But I just noticed that when I click your available ad spaces, there's no info on how one can purchase.
    Maybe you can make a page for that... like your contact details and supposed rates...
     
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    Thanks alot GekiDan for you feedback. Yes you are right, some pages are still under construction & I am working on it and will upload them by the end of these week.

    Regards
     
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    Thanks a lot for approving the link to BAF mrchamp. Please feel free to post any questions you have in our relevant forum sections, you could even request for your site to be reviewed in our Website & Graphic Reviews section and advertise it in our Free Advertising Forums.
     
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    Fergal, this thread is already in the Website & Graphic Reviews section. ;)
     
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    Thanks GekiDan, I see that now.
     
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    Very nice. I love the use of colour in the header of the site but as I scroll down it gets dark.
    Maybe more graphics besides ads would be good.
     
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    Thatz gr8 Fergal :) Thanks alot once again :)

    Thanks alot Jerlene for you valuable suggestion. I will try to create something more creative for the footer section.. Mid section is totally based on the Ads graphics.
     
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    HI,
    The site look very good, but i will do some small changes:
    - dont write with white over yellow, is very hard to read...
    - on Ad Categories, ad some photos, it will look better, maybe small icons on the categories.
    - remove the bottom menu, is alredy on top, no point repeting it.

    Good luck
     
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