Need your thought regarding tagline

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  1. Alexishost

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    Need your your advice or suggestion regarding tagline
    Hi, I am happy to know which taqline below that feel good with you . Which one is the best? which one that you like.

    Alexishost - Helping business owner host their site in stable, reliable and professional web hosting environment

    Host it with Alexishost Green business hosting provider, be more secure, more productive,less stress .

    Or do you have another creative variation that you think the best

    Thanks
     
  2. Fergal

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    Personally I prefer tag lines that are short in terms of word count. This gives them greater impact and makes them more memorable. My suggestion would be to go with something as brief as "Green Business Hosting".

    What are the one of two key benefits that you want to communicate about your hosting service?
     
  3. Joseph.Shivell

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    I agree with Fergal. Remember the acronym KISS- Keep It Short and Simple. I would take your first tagline and shorten it to this:

    Alexishost - stable, reliable and professional web hosting.
     
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    its good to keep your tagline short, easy to understand and straight to the point :)
     
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    Have you any suggestions on a tagline Alexishost could use?
     
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    Alexishost- ''Hosting done right''
     
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    Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting"
     
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    Alexishost- Advanced business solutions..
    Alexishost- Secure & reliable business hostings..
     
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    I like Dan's but I'd change it a bit:

    Alexishost Web Hosting
    Green. Stable. Professional.


    Oh...btw, do you have dedicated (green) boxes?
     
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    Thank you.

    tagline that feel good to you - a business owner.
    thanks fergal, geki, gary, and freelancemom for your thought. as you know alexishost is serving business owner.
    which tagline below that feels good to you as business owner?

    is it ...
    Alexishost Web Hosting
    Green. Stable. Professional.


    Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting" - ( i like it geki thanks!)

    alexishost - Get the stable, reliable, professional green hosting for a business right now! ( I also like it.)
     
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    Personally, I am not a fan of taglines per se.

    Just as Fergal said, you want to communicate your benefits - your USP.

    If "green" is something that matters to your audience include that. That's not something that's very common.

    However, you still want to communicate advantage over your competition as much as you can.

    Every other hosting provider says they are stable and professional. So, if you say the same thing you are not leveraging the possibility of using your tag line to sell.

    You'd just be having a tagline that doesn't really add value to your service in the eyes of your customer.
     
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    Alexishost- Your business hosting solution
     
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  14. Fergal

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    I like Guy Kawasaki's views on the subject. In the video below he talks about having a mantra as opposed to a mission statement - the video could be helpful to anyone writing a tagline.

    [YOUTUBE]jT7xlFTinIw[/YOUTUBE]
     
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    Tagline Is Short and should include some keywords that refers to the kind of service you are providing...
    AlexiHost-Hosting your WebSite is a Home Dwelling matter NOW!!

    Designed Your Website,Take the next Step @AlexiHost

    AlexiHost-Management and Solutions of All Hosting Needs

    AlexiHost-Trust Us, Choose Us, Host on Us
     
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    I agree with adwordsmogul because you have to be able to set yourself apart from your competition and to be able to clearly articulate what your USP is. Really try to refine what it is that you do best and how it is different/better than your competition otherwise you are just white-noise. A lot of great advice in the posts on this topic.
     
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    i like this one it seems complete and conveys the message and informs the reader whats it about "
    Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting"
     
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    Your score
    Please give score for the tagline below : ( 1-5) . 5 is the best.

    1. Alexishost green business hosting
    2. Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting
    3. Alexishost - We host your peace of mind

    I will calculate your score. and we will use the tagline that get the highest score for our company tagline

    Appreciation
    I appreciate for all of the current comment and reply.
     
    #18 Alexishost, Feb 2, 2011
    Last edited: Feb 2, 2011
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    1. Alexishost green business hosting - 4 (perhaps I'm biased)
    2. Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting - 3 - I might change it to "Stable, reliable and professional business hosting"
    3. Alexishost - We host your peace of mind - 3

    Please let us know what tagline you decide to use.
     
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    1. Alexishost green business hosting - 4
    2. Alexishost - "Stable, reliable and professional web hosting - 4
    3. Alexishost - We host your peace of mind - 3
     

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