Let's see how harsh can you be criticizing my site.

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  1. dbs00

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    Hey fellas,

    Please have a look at bywex.com and tell me what do you think about it.

    I'm going to focus on the Custom Bots part

    What I know I need to do:

    1. Homepage
    Maybe a little more content and the blog posts
    2. Email capture forms ( autoresponder )


    2. Custom Bots page

    • I need to add more pictures, maybe add different background images or designs for different page sections.
    • Maybe some Animations to the icons
    • More examples



    3. Blog ( well I have to make the blog first and start adding content to it)

    4. SAT my first public bot for sale in a small niche. How does that sale page look to you?

    1. What else would you suggest to add into those pages?
    2. How about others pages that I should add regarding freelancing on custom tailored software?
    3. What do you think about the SAT sale page?

    Thank you for taking the time in checking it out,
    Looking forward in seeing your answers!
     
  2. Joseph.Shivell

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    Have you ever heard the expression "Be careful what you ask for, you may get it"? Regardless, here goes.

    First, I entered your URL into my browser, and was waiting for 10 seconds because I didn't realize the page had loaded. Actually it may not have, but all I saw on my screen was whitespace with a navigation bar on top and the words "NEED A" on the bottom. After a few minutes, the photo finally loaded. Most visitors would probably leave long before the photo loads, because there is apparently nothing on the page. I then scrolled, and scrolled, and scrolled some more, and fiinally reached the bottom of the page. Just for kicks, I decided to pretend I was going to print the page - it took 13 pages! In contrast, the home page for the company I am affiliated with took 3. The "Custom Bots" page took 16 pages. The "S.A.T." page took only 7 pages, but I think you get the idea. These pages are way too long, with way too much information on a single page. Find a way to condense the information, and add "Read More" links that visitors can click on to go to separate pages if they need more information. The FAQs should definitely have their own page. The "Some examples of what you can automate" provides more details about "What our bots can do". Take the "What our bots can do" section and make it a separate page, with each graphic linking to the pertinent subjects of "examples of what you can automate". This will also give you the opportunity to add more details to the "examples", since each category will now have it's own page. The second "get a free quote now!" button is buried in the middle of the page, and there is really no reason for the graphic in the middle of the page.
    There's more, but I don't have time for it right now, I'll come back and review the other pages later.
     
  3. dbs00

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    Hey,
    "Be careful what you ask for, you may get it"? In this case that was my point. Not to get replies with nice, good etc.

    Thanks for taking the time in checking it out.

    I just tried the Print Thing as well, but its showing just 5 pages for my homepage. 11 for custom bots and 12 for Sat.
    Hmm if I open bywex with a Chrome Incognigo indeed the loading speed seems a bit slow . ~ 10 seconds. if I open it normally its just 1-2 sec. Anyway, I'll optimize that main pic, most likely I didn't and that should speed it up significantly.

    Regarding the Long Pages. That was my goal. To make One Long Sale page for the Custom Bots and for Each public bot. I can add a menu every 2-3 "pages" with quick links for other stuff on that long page. Maybe the reader is looking for something in particular and that will help him find it faster.

    I'll make the Articles on the blog with 1 -2 paragraphs and Read More button.

    The FAQs should definitely have their own page. The FAQ are different in those 2 cases Custom bots and SAT so I think I'll leave them at the end of the sale page. I might add the generic parts into a Main FAQ with a notice that each product might have different FAQ as well.

    "Take the "What our bots can do" section and make it a separate page, with each graphic linking to the pertinent subjects of "examples of what you can automate" This is a very good idea . Thank you. I'll implement it.

    Looking forward in getting more harsh feedback from you whenever you have the time! :)
     

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